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I will describe an ideal weekend. It is a difficult to describe, but I will do it.
The weekend is very fantastic. This is gift for a week. If I live hard for a week, the weekend is like a present.
But if I’m not hard for a week, the weekend is like a self reflection.
I think that weekend is not change anything.
It’s because rest is very important thing of the life.
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I will describe an ideal weekend. It is a difficult to describe, but I will do it.
>> I will describe an ideal weekend. It is difficult to describe, but I will try.
The weekend is very fantastic.
>> Correct!
This is gift for a week. If I live hard for a week, the weekend is like a present.
>> This is a one-week gift. After a week of hard work, the weekend is like a gift.
But if I’m not hard for a week, the weekend is like a self reflection.
>> If I don\'t work hard all week, the weekend allows me to reflect.
I think that weekend is not change anything.
>> I don\'t think the weekend will change anything.
It’s because rest is very important thing of the life.
>> It\'s because rest is an important part of life.
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