3.9 Homework

2015-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! When I submit my homework, time is always against me. I feel hard about that. What is a good education? I think that the most important thing in education our kids is the parent's love to them and acknowledge their existence. These can give them to be confident and it would be based on living as a human being. I think that it is also important to have a lot of conversations with them and to listen well the story of them. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework even if it is hard on your part. You can do your homework if you have time. I would understand if you are busy. Thank you! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct. When I submit my homework, time is always against me. >> Correct. I feel hard about that.>> It is hard on my part.What is a good education?I think that the most important thing in education our kids is the parent\'s love to them and acknowledge their existence. >> I think that the most important thing in the education of our kids is our love for them and the way we acknowldge their existence/presence. These can give them to be confident and it would be based on living as a human being. >> These can give them confidence as their develop themselves. I think that it is also important to have a lot of conversations with them and to listen well the story of them.>> I think that it is also important to have a lot of conversation with them and listen well to their story.Thank you! >> Correct.

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