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2018-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Q: An accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others. When I contact a difficulty or new thing, I keep telling myself what this will be the change for upgrading myself. After I entered graduate school for master course and doctoral course, I met new chance like this. When I submit first international journal article and apply first proposal to get research budget, I was really hard. But, on second time, It was relatively easy. So, I like to tell to me what I will upgrade on step after this difficulty. I will keep going this my way forever. If so, I can do anything.

강사 첨삭

Keep accomplishing great things [이름]!

Don\'t be frightened by challenges and obstacles.

See you on Monday!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


Q: An accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.

When I contact a difficulty or new thing, I keep telling myself what this will be the change for upgrading myself.

>>> When I experience difficulties or new things, I keep telling asking myself whether these will change me for the better.
After I entered graduate school for master course and doctoral course, I met new chance like this. 

>>> After I entered graduate school for master\'s course and doctoral course, I faced chances like these.
When I submit first international journal article and apply first proposal to get research budget, I was really hard.

>>> When I submitted my first international journal article and applied my first proposal to get the research budget / fund, I had a hard time.
But, on second time, It was relatively easy. 

>>> But, on the second time, it was relatively easy.
So, I like to tell to me what I will upgrade on step after this difficulty.

>>> So, I told myself what I really need to improve after I overcome the difficulty.
I will keep going this my way forever. 

>>> I will keep doing this forever.
If so, I can do anything.

>>> This way, I can do anything.

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