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강사 첨삭
Hi!
This is the last one. ^^
I hope this helps, and I really hope you get the job!
~t. Ally
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◌ Helper for foreign students
SUNGSHIN UNIVERSITY (Feb-June 2018)
& #8226; Helped them in their school orientation and introduced the Korean life style.
& #8226; Learned different cultures and how to cope with and become close to foreigners.
& #9676; Art teacher for the disabled _
KOREA KUWHA SCHOOL FOR THE DISABLED (Mar-Jun.2016)
& #8226; Taught a student with mental retardation and a student who is mute art. (mental illnesses should be presented individually and not as a representation for the person him/herself. We have to be careful here, because some employers might see it as an offense. ^^ )
• Put myself into their shoes and tried to be attentive and considerate using proper words.
Education
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& #9676;SUNGSHIN WOMEN\'S UNIVERSITY (Transfer) (Mar.2017-present)
Bachelor of Oriental Painting, College of Arts
expected graduation date: Aug. 2019
Double Major: Convergence Design
& #9676;KANGWON UNIVERSITY(Mar.2014- Feb. 2017)
(dropped out of college for a transfer)
Visual Communication Design, College of Art& Culture
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