3-9th Homework

2016-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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First of all, I think that we can know or learn all things, which is very dangerous. In this world, there are many things that I never heard of and I never imagine. And also, many cleaver people devotes to know about their interests. It's because they want to know more and they know that there are many things they don't know. All things good to know is difficult to learn. Yes, I agree to. So many things are leaved at the state of unknown in this world. For example, we don't know, why the orbit of the earth tilts with some degrees. The attitude for the knowledge that we have to get is the interest and the humility. We never know all things in the world. Maybe, if someone said that I already know everything, this is a liar. So, if you say that you don't know about the unknown things, it is normal. Anyway, today topic is difficult for me to write. I always want to kwon something that I don't know, which bothers me sometimes. But after knowing that, I'm very proud of me.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! ^_^ Thank you very much for still doing your best to write an essay even if you find the topic difficult. I applaud you for that. I am proud of you too. Having the desire to discover the unknown is the exact definition of an intelligent person. Intelligent people are constantly curious. They don\'t stop until they get the correct answer. I think you are absolutely on the right track. Keep it up! I hope you are doing great. See you again on Tuesday. Take care. ~Teacher C[이름] :) First of all, I think that we can know or learn all things, which is very dangerous. >> [Do you mean]: First of all, I think we are capable of learning all things, which is very dangerous. In this world, there are many things that I never heard of and I never imagine. >> In this world, there are many things that I have never heard of and have never imagined. And also, many cleaver people devotes to know about their interests. >> And also, many clever people devote their time to know more about their interests. It\'s because they want to know more and they know that there are many things they don\'t know. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s because they want to know more and they know that there are many things to learn. All things good to know is difficult to learn. >> All things that are good to know are difficult to learn. Yes, I agree to. >> Yes, I agree too. So many things are leaved at the state of unknown in this world. >> So many things are left in an unknown state in this world. For example, we don\'t know, why the orbit of the earth tilts with some degrees. >> [Do you mean]: For example, we don\'t know, why the earth is slightly tilted by a few degrees. The attitude for the knowledge that we have to get is the interest and the humility. >> The attitude that we should have when acquiring knowledge should consist of interest and humility. We never know all things in the world. >> CORRECT! OR >> We would never know everything in this world. Maybe, if someone said that I already know everything, this is a liar. >> Maybe, if someone said that, \"I already know everything\", that person is a liar. So, if you say that you don\'t know about the unknown things, it is normal. >> CORRECT! OR >> It is normal for a person to say that they don\'t know much about the unknown. Anyway, today topic is difficult for me to write. >> Anyway, today\'s topic is difficult for me to write about. I always want to kwon something that I don\'t know, which bothers me sometimes. >> I always want to know something that I don\'t know, which bothers me sometimes. But after knowing that, I\'m very proud of me. >> But after knowing that, I\'m very proud of myself.

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