3 Achievements

- I've been studied abroad in Canada and USA for 1 year. When I stayed there, I attended an advanced level in Eglish class and I got a CAE certificate ( cambridge in Advanced English ). The teachers who were in charge of the CAE class commended on my improvement and integrity. I was never late for the class. What's more, I never showed the lazy attitude on preparing for the class and completed every homework. Before taking that class, my English level was much lower than any other student. However, I could keep up with them and got the certificate at the end. -In addition to that, I could get a score of 101 on the Toefl which was higher score than my aim in USA. In Toefl class, I studied with classmates from different countries such as France , Italy , Turkey, Saudi Arabia and Brazil and my friends’ various background made me having a mind-opening perspective on world and being familiar with global issues. - I had an experience in helping with friends from different countries. I volunteered in Cambodia and Vitenam in 2010. I translated Korean into English for making a smooth process in volunteer work between our staffs and staffs in a church orphanage. I taught English and math to kids. What’s more , I planned some projects to make kids and our staffs become more intimate, such as Korean Song Contest or Korean Dishes Cooking Class. Most friends liked my plan and enjoyed it. Also, I got along with most of staffs and kids easily due to my outgoing personality.

Wow that\'s pretty impressive. Seems like you\'ve really worked hard on your English skills. I\'m very happy as well to hear that you also try to share your knowledge to other people. Way to go [이름]! Keep it up! ^^   - I\'ve been studied abroad in Canada and USA for 1 year. >>I\'ve studied abroad in Canada and USA for a year. When I stayed there, I attended an advanced level in Eglish class and I got a CAE certificate ( cambridge in Advanced English ). >>While staying there, I attended an advanced level in English class and got a CAE certificate (Cambridge in Advanced English ). The teachers who were in charge of the CAE class commended on my improvement and integrity. >>Correct!  I was never late for the class. >>I was never late for class. What\'s more, I never showed the lazy attitude on preparing for the class and completed every homework. >>What\'s more, I never showed any lazy attitude in preparing for class and in completing all of my homework.  OR >>What\'s more, I was never lazy in preparing for class and in doing my homework. Before taking that class, my English level was much lower than any other student. >>Correct!  However, I could keep up with them and got the certificate at the end. >>However, I was able to keep up with them ang got the certificate at the end.-In addition to that, I could get a score of 101 on the Toefl which was higher score than my aim in USA. >>In addition to that, I was able to get a score or 101 on TOEFL which was higher than my aim in USA. In Toefl class, I studied with classmates from different countries such as France , Italy , Turkey, Saudi Arabia and Brazil and my friends’ various background made me having a mind-opening perspective on world and being familiar with global issues. >>In my TOEFL class, I studied with students from different countries such as France, Italy, Turkey, Saudi Arabia and Brazil. My classmates from various backgrounds gave me an open mind and a new perspective on the world and made me familiar with global issues as well. - I had an experience in helping with friends from different countries. >>I had an experience helping my friends from different countries. I volunteered in Cambodia and Vitenam in 2010. >>Correct! I translated Korean into English for making a smooth process in volunteer work between our staffs and staffs in a church orphanage. >>I translated Korean into English to make a smoother process with our work between our staffs and the staffs of the church orphanage. I taught English and math to kids. >>Correct! What’s more , I planned some projects to make kids and our staffs become more intimate, such as Korean Song Contest or Korean Dishes Cooking Class. >>What\'s more, I planned some projects to make kids and our staffs become more intimate, such as Korean Song Contest and Korean Dishes Cooking Class. Most friends liked my plan and enjoyed it. >>Most of my friends liked my plan and enjoyed it as well. Also, I got along with most of staffs and kids easily due to my outgoing personality. >>Correct!