3. Do you think boys have a different point of vi
학생이 쓴 원문
To man, friendship is playing with friends.
Playing sport , video game
and driking is our friend ship.
We barely talk about each other's life even when we are in a
trouble.
But girls need someone who can listen to their story.
They talk about everything happend in their lives.
It is a difference between the friendship of man and woman.
강사 첨삭
To man, friendship is playing with friends.
>>For guys, friendship is like playing.
Playing sport , video game and driking is our friend ship.
>>Playing sports, video games and drinking is our kind of stuff.
We barely talk about each other's life even when we are in a
trouble.
>>We barely talk to each other about our lives even if we are in trouble.
But girls need someone who can listen to their story.
>>correct!
They talk about everything happend in their lives.
>>They talk about everything.
It is a difference between the friendship of man and woman.
>>Thats the difference between having a male friend to a female one.
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