3 homework. -jenny-

2021-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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1. Why do you study english? I want live overseas a few month or several years. Especially I want live in hawaii or bali. When I trip english speak country,I can more understan their culture and I can more enjoy my trip. I can make foreign friends and conversation with them. 2.TIP I could be reject it. Because we don\'t have tip culture. But I think I have to polite when say no. 3. IS. WAS .BE My blood type is \"O\" He was broke with girlfriend yesterday. If You quit your job,you can be free. I tried do my best I really enjoying your english class ! Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Jennie!

It is wonderful to see you here on the composition page! Finally, you found your way here on this site. I am so happy that you answered all of the homework that I gave you. Tomorrow, you can send them to me everyday so that you will not have a very difficult time answering three questions all at once.

Anyway, below you can see my suggestions and I hope that you will try to use the grammar patterns as well as the use marks to make your sentences better.

I will see you again tomorrow and thank you very much for doing your homework!

-T Donna =)

1. Why do you study english?

I want live overseas a few month or several years. Especially I want live in hawaii or bali.

>> Correct!

Or: I want live overseas a few month or several years. Especially, I want live in Hawaii or Bali.

When I trip english speak country,I can more understan their culture and I can more enjoy my trip.

>> When I take a trip in an English speaking country, I can understand more of their culture and I can more enjoy my trip.

I can make foreign friends and conversation with them.

>> Correct!

2.TIP

I could be reject it. Because we don\'t have tip culture.

>> I could reject it because we don\'t have a tip culture.

But I think I have to polite when say no.

>> But I think I have to be polite when I say no.

3. IS. WAS .BE

My blood type is \"O\"

>> Correct!

Or: My blood type is \"O\".

He was broke with girlfriend yesterday.

>> We was broken when her girlfriend left him yesterday.

If You quit your job,you can be free.

>> Correct!

Or: If you quit your job, you can be free.

I tried do my best
I really enjoying your english class !
Thank you!

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