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Hello [이름]!

I like it that you write creatively. Some reminders:

1. Check your spelling.

examples: clothes, heavy

2. Be mindful of your word order to avoid confusion.

example: However, I spend a lot of money in spring.

Teacher Venus^^

My favorite weather is spring.

>>>CORRECT

I like spring because spring bring many flowers and warm.
>>>I like spring because spring brings many flowers. It is also warm.

I can see many green trees everywhere.

>>>CORRECT

When I think about spring, spring is the time of growth and renewal.

>>>CORRECT

I like to wear light colthes I don\'t like heave colthes.

>>>I like to wear light clothes. I don\'t like heavy clothes.

However I spend in spring a lot of money.

>>>However, I spend a lot of money in spring.

Because I have to buy the presents of Parent\'s day, Children\'s day and Teacher\'s day.

>>>Because I have to buy presents for Parent\'s day, Children\'s day and Teacher\'s day.

I still like spring and I think spring weather is happiness weather.

>>>I still like spring and I think spring makes us happy.