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학생이 쓴 원문
Keeping up with latest fashion trend and style is not easy.
Many fashion people have to keep interest in fashion trend because it changes very fast.
They also have to spend money to keep up.
In my opinion, I want young people to save money for their future.
However they can keep up with latest fashion trend and style with cheap items.
It is very smart.
Nawadays many young people are very smart.
강사 첨삭
Keeping up with latest fashion trend and style is not easy.
>> Correct
Many fashion people have to keep interest in fashion trend because it changes very fast.
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They also have to spend money to keep up.
>> Correct
In my opinion, I want young people to save money for their future.
>> Correct
However they can keep up with latest fashion trend and style with cheap items.
>> However, they can keep up with the latest fashion trend and style with cheap items.
It is very smart.
>> Correct
Nawadays many young people are very smart.
>> Nowadays, many young people are very smart.
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