30-day homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In February,my mom an my friends have birthdays
,and the New Year\'s Day also rises,and the snow
from the sky rises.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
I tried my best to interpret the latter part of your composition.
We can discuss this in class if you want to.
I will see you later then. Enjoy the rest of your day! ^^,)
__T. Mayleen :)
In February,my mom an my friends have birthdays
>>> In February, my mom and a friend of mine will celebrate their birthday.
,and the New Year\'s Day also rises,and the snow
from the sky rises.
,and the New Year\'s Day also rises,and the snow
from the sky rises.
>>> Also, we will celebrate the Lunar New Year as we bid good bye to winter.
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