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It's already summer in my country so It is very hot. Many people enjoy the weather. They can go to beach, a water park and many exciting places. My family like to go many exciting places too, but I don't like this weather. Because my skin is very sensitive so my skin happen many trouble because of sun light. However I am happy because my family looks happy. My family is all of my lives. Sometimes, when I feel so hot, I visit a bank which is a cool envirment and then I stay there for a bit.

Hello [이름]!   I like reading your homework. It makes sense to me. Some reminders:   1. Capitalization It\'s already summer in my country so it is very hot. (\'it\' should not be capitalized).   2. Articles (a,an,the) An article is a kind of adjective which is always used with and gives some information about a noun. There are only two articles a and the, but they are used very often and are important for using English accurately.   3. Prepositions My family likes to go to many exciting places too, but I don\'t like this weather. (\'to\' is needed here)   Teacher Venus^^   It\'s already summer in my country so It is very hot.>>>It\'s already summer in my country so it is very hot.   Many people enjoy the weather. >>>Many people enjoy the [이름] weather. They can go to beach, a water park and many exciting places. >>>They can go to a beach, a water park and many exciting places. My family like to go many exciting places too, but I don\'t like this weather. >>>My family likes to go to many exciting places too, but I don\'t like this weather. Because my skin is very sensitive so my skin happen many trouble because of sun light. >>>Because my skin is very sensitive, my skin gets sun burnt easily. However I am happy because my family looks happy. >>>CORRECT My family is all of my lives. >>>My family is my life. Sometimes, when I feel so hot, I visit a bank which is a cool envirment and then I stay there for a bit. >>>Sometimes when I feel so hot, I visit a bank which has a cool environment and then I stay there for a bit.