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학생이 쓴 원문
I first used the internet about 10 years ago.
10 years ago, many Korean people liked to buy through online.
It was trend to buy something online.
When you buy something through online, you have to be careful because sometimes the quality of goods are bery bad.
So, these days I don't like to buy something through online.
Searching the good stuff are not easy.
However, I often buy some book throught online.
It is easy and fast.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I like this topic. Some reminders:
1. \'Through\' is not needed in this sentence.
People like to buy online.
2. Basic Principle: Singular subjects need singular verbs; plural subjects need plural verbs.
example: Searching the good stuff is not easy.
The quality of goods is very bad.
Teacher Venus^^
I first used the internet about 10 years ago.
>>>CORRECT
10 years ago, many Korean people liked to buy through online.
>>>Ten years ago, many Korean people liked to buy online.
It was trend to buy something online.
>>>It was a trend to buy something online.
When you buy something through online, you have to be careful because sometimes the quality of goods are bery bad.
>>>When you buy something online, you have to be careful because sometimes the quality of goods is very bad.
So, these days I don\'t like to buy something through online.
>>>So, these days I don\'t like to buy something online.
Searching the good stuff are not easy.
>>>Searching the good stuff is not easy.
However, I often buy some book throught online.
>>>However, I often buy some books online.
It is easy and fast.
>>>CORRECT
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