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Ballad music is my favorite type of music. It makes me comfortable and calm. My favorite singer is Mariah Carey. I like that musician because she sings with so much emotion. She has a very beautiful voice. I think she is a very talented artist. My daughter's favorite singer is maroon5 but I don't know him. One day when I listen to Maroon5's music, I feel excited. So I sometimes listen to Maroon5's music entitled Maps.

Hello [이름]!   Thank you for your effort. Just be reminded of your capitalizations and the meaning of \'one day\'. one day at a particular but unspecified time in the past. example:  \"One day a boy started teasing Grady\"   Teacher Venus^^   Ballad music is my favorite type of music. >>>CORRECT It makes me comfortable and calm. >>>CORRECT My favorite singer is Mariah Carey. >>>CORRECT I like that musician because she sings with so much emotion. >>>CORRECT She has a very beautiful voice. >>>CORRECT I think she is a very talented artist. >>>CORRECT My daughter\'s favorite singer is maroon5 but I don\'t know him.>>>My daughter\'s favorite singer is Maroon 5 but I don\'t know that band.   One day when I listen to Maroon5\'s music, I feel excited. >>>One day when I listened to Maroon 5\'s music, I felt excited. So I sometimes listen to Maroon5\'s music entitled Maps. >>>So I sometimes listen to Maroon 5\'s music entitled \'Maps\'.