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2018-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

Some people say "All live is very important" so they oppose death sentence. Some people who are the injured say "A devil of men need death sentence" In my opinion, death sentence has pros an cons. The death sentence can be an example, but some people need opportunity to change their new life.

강사 첨삭

Some people say \"All live is very important\" so they oppose death sentence.

>> Some people say, \"All lives are important.\" so they oppose death sentence.
 Some people who are the injured say \"A devil of men need death sentence\"

>> Some people who are the victims say, \"An evil man needs death sentence.\"

or

>> But the victims would say, \"An evil man deserves death sentence.\"
 In my opinion, death sentence has pros and cons.

>> Correct
 The death sentence can be an example, but some people need opportunity to change their new life.

>> Death sentence can be an example, but some people need opportunity to change their new life.

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