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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
You are right.
>> Correct
I have to remmber why I am learning English and I never forget it.
>> I have to remember why I am learning English and I should never forget it.
When I started learning English, I wanted to speak English while I travel abroad with my family.
>> Correct
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>> When I started learning English, I wanted to speak English well when I travel abroad with my family.
I also thought to need for my future because nawadays everything changes very fast.
>> I also thought the need of it for my future because nowadays everything changes very fast.
I also thought if I don\'t perpare in advance, I could not work in my office for a long time.
>> I also thought that if I don\'t prepare in advance, I could not work in my office for a long time.
I remmber it. And I continue to learn and keep it
>> I have to remember it and continue to learn and keep it.
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