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2015-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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Hi, my name is [이름]. I will visit your town with my friends next week. I heard that your town will have a lot of events. When I heard that, I was very happy with my friends. However, I don't know about your town. Could you send an e-mail about your town to me? We want to know about the history of your town. Before I visit there, my friends and I will research about your place. Also, we like free events. So, could you tell me about it? I want to spend an enjoyable time with my friends. We need your help.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   Wow! I\'m amazed that all your sentences are correct. Keep it up.   Teacher Venus^^   Hi, my name is [이름]. >>>CORRECT I will visit your town with my friends next week. >>>CORRECT I heard that your town will have a lot of events. >>>CORRECT When I heard that, I was very happy with my friends. >>>CORRECT However, I don\'t know about your town. >>>CORRECT Could you send an e-mail about your town to me? >>>CORRECT We want to know about the history of your town. >>>CORRECT Before I visit there, my friends and I will research about your place. >>>CORRECT Also, we like free events. >>>CORRECT So, could you tell me about it? >>>CORRECT I want to spend an enjoyable time with my friends. >>>CORRECT We need your help. >>>CORRECT

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