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Hi, my name is [이름].
I will visit your town with my friends next week.
I heard that your town will have a lot of events.
When I heard that, I was very happy with my friends.
However, I don't know about your town.
Could you send an e-mail about your town to me?
We want to know about the history of your town.
Before I visit there, my friends and I will research about your place.
Also, we like free events.
So, could you tell me about it?
I want to spend an enjoyable time with my friends.
We need your help.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Wow! I\'m amazed that all your sentences are correct. Keep it up.
Teacher Venus^^
Hi, my name is [이름].
>>>CORRECT
I will visit your town with my friends next week.
>>>CORRECT
I heard that your town will have a lot of events.
>>>CORRECT
When I heard that, I was very happy with my friends.
>>>CORRECT
However, I don\'t know about your town.
>>>CORRECT
Could you send an e-mail about your town to me?
>>>CORRECT
We want to know about the history of your town.
>>>CORRECT
Before I visit there, my friends and I will research about your place.
>>>CORRECT
Also, we like free events.
>>>CORRECT
So, could you tell me about it?
>>>CORRECT
I want to spend an enjoyable time with my friends.
>>>CORRECT
We need your help.
>>>CORRECT
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