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You\'re right.
Sometimes time just seems to not exist at all.
>> Sometimes, time just seems to not exist at all.
I don\'t like waste time so even I don\'t like to go to the beauty shop.
>> I don\'t like to waste time so I don\'t even like to go to the beauty shop.
When I was young, I wasted time also I can\'t go back in the past now.
>> When I was young, I wasted too much time but I can\'t go back in the past now.
So I hope my childre don\'t waste time in their life.
>> So, I hope my children don\'t waste any time of their life.
But they don\'t know yet that time is very fast and important.
>> But they don\'t know how fast and important time is yet.
Most people realize too late it.
>> Most people realize it too late.
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