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2018-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

You're right. Sometimes time just seems to not exist at all. I don't like waste time so even I don't like to go to the beauty shop. When I was young, I wasted time also I can't go back in the past now. So I hope my childre don't waste time in their life. But they don't know yet that time is very fast and important. Most people realize too late it.

강사 첨삭

You\'re right.
Sometimes time just seems to not exist at all.

>> Sometimes, time just seems to not exist at all.
 I don\'t like waste time so even I don\'t like to go to the beauty shop.

>> I don\'t like to waste time so I don\'t even like to go to the beauty shop.
 When I was young, I wasted time also I can\'t go back in the past now.

>> When I was young, I wasted too much time but I can\'t go back in the past now.
 So I hope my childre don\'t waste time in their life.

>> So, I hope my children don\'t waste any time of their life.
 But they don\'t know yet that time is very fast and important.

>> But they don\'t know how fast and important time is yet.
 Most people realize too late it.

>> Most people realize it too late.

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