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2015-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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Hello, Good afternoon! This is [이름]. I heard that you are vary kind and your good service. I would like to make a dinner reservation in your restaurant this Sunday. I will have dinner with my family at 7 pm. My family are 5 members. Before I will make the reservation, I want to know about something. I have some discount coupon. Do you offer discounts with coupon? I wonder the cost of dinner. How much are them? Also I want a quiet place. Do you offer it?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   It\'s nice to check your homework again. Some reminders:1. \'Before\', and other time words like \'after, until, when, as soon as\', are not usually followed by future tense. example: Before I make the reservation, I want to know about something   2. wonder about something- to be curious or in doubt about someone or something. example: I wonder about the cost of dinner.   Teacher Venus^^   Hello, Good afternoon! >>>CORRECT This is [이름]. >>>CORRECT I heard that you are vary kind and your good service. >>> I would like to make a dinner reservation in your restaurant this Sunday.   I will have dinner with my family at 7 pm.>>>CORRECT   My family are 5 members.>>>There are five people in my family.   Before I will make the reservation, I want to know about something.>>>Before I make the reservation, I want to know about something.   I have some discount coupon.>>>CORRECT   Do you offer discounts with coupon?>>>Do you accept discount coupons?   I wonder the cost of dinner.>>>I wonder about the cost of dinner.   How much are them?>>>How much is it?   Also I want a quiet place.>>>CORRECT   Do you offer it? >>>CORRECT

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