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강사 첨삭
If I could be invisible for a day, I would go to the my children\'s school.
>>If I could be invisible for a day, I would go to the my children\'s school.
I wonder their school life.
>> I wonder about their school life.
Most parents don\'t know well their children like me.
>> Most parents don\'t know well about their children like me.
So I wonder theri life... do they have many friends? do they feel happy in the school? do they have a lot of stress?
>> So I wonder about their life... do they have many friends? do they feel happy in the school? do they have a lot of stress?
These are the reason why I wonder.
>> Correct
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