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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, this is [이름].
I promised that I will go a trip next month with you.
However, my husband already made a reservation for trip next month.
I didn't know about it because it is the present of my birthday for me.
He already paid cost of trip.
So I can't go the trip with you.
I am so sorry.
If you want, you can go the trip with my family.
Do you want to go with my family?
How about going this weekend?
After you think, call me please.
I am really sorry again.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You did well again. Some reminders:
1. go on a trip- travel
example: I promised that I will go on a trip next month with you.
2. Don\'t forget to put an article. It is a kind of adjective which is always used with and gives information about a noun. There are only two articles a and the, but they are used very often and are important for using English accurately.
example: He already paid the cost of our trip.
Teacher Venus^^
Hi, this is [이름].
>>>CORRECT
I promised that I will go a trip next month with you.
>>>I promised that I will go on a trip next month with you.However, my husband already made a reservation for trip next month.
>>>However, my husband already made a reservation for our trip next month.I didn\'t know about it because it is the present of my birthday for me.
>>>I didn\'t know about it because it is his birthday present for me.
He already paid cost of trip.
>>>He already paid the cost of our trip.So I can\'t go the trip with you.
>>>So I can\'t go on a trip with you.I am so sorry.
>>>CORRECTIf you want, you can go the trip with my family.
>>>If you want, you can go on a trip with my family.
Do you want to go with my family?
>>>CORRECTHow about going this weekend?
>>>CORRECTAfter you think, call me please.
>>>After thinking about your decision, call me please.I am really sorry again.
>>>CORRECT
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