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2015-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, this is [이름]. I promised that I will go a trip next month with you. However, my husband already made a reservation for trip next month. I didn't know about it because it is the present of my birthday for me. He already paid cost of trip. So I can't go the trip with you. I am so sorry. If you want, you can go the trip with my family. Do you want to go with my family? How about going this weekend? After you think, call me please. I am really sorry again.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You did well again. Some reminders: 1. go on a trip- travel example: I promised that I will go on a trip next month with you. 2. Don\'t forget to put an article. It is a kind of adjective which is always used with and gives information about a noun. There are only two articles a and the, but they are used very often and are important for using English accurately. example: He already paid the cost of our trip.   Teacher Venus^^   Hi, this is [이름]. >>>CORRECT I promised that I will go a trip next month with you. >>>I promised that I will go on a trip next month with you.However, my husband already made a reservation for trip next month. >>>However, my husband already made a reservation for our trip next month.I didn\'t know about it because it is the present of my birthday for me. >>>I didn\'t know about it because it is his birthday present for me. He already paid cost of trip. >>>He already paid the cost of our trip.So I can\'t go the trip with you. >>>So I can\'t go on a trip with you.I am so sorry. >>>CORRECTIf you want, you can go the trip with my family. >>>If you want, you can go on a trip with my family. Do you want to go with my family? >>>CORRECTHow about going this weekend? >>>CORRECTAfter you think, call me please. >>>After thinking about your decision, call me please.I am really sorry again. >>>CORRECT

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