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2015-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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I live with my family who is 4 members. My Husband is responsible for cleaning restroom. My youngest daughter has to clean the tables and my oldest daughter has to vacuum the floor. I wash the dishes and a lot of things. My family help each other because we are all very busy. After finishing our house chores I feel good.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You really have an amazing family. Some reminders: 1. \'Older\' and \'oldest\' are used of people or things, but \'elder\' and \'eldest\' are used only of people, and only for members of the same family. 2. If the subordinating conjunction comes at the beginning of the sentence -add a comma at the end of the dependent clause.   Teacher Venus^^   I live with my family who is 4 members. >>>I live with my family consisting of 4 members. My Husband is responsible for cleaning restroom. >>>My husband is responsible for cleaning the restroom. My youngest daughter has to clean the tables and my oldest daughter has to vacuum the floor. >>>My youngest daughter has to clean the tables and my eldest daughter has to vacuum the floor.I wash the dishes and a lot of things. >>>I wash the dishes and do a lot of things. My family help each other because we are all very busy. >>>CORRECT After finishing our house chores I feel good. >>>After finishing our house chores, I feel good.

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