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There are many debates about taxes.
Some insist people shold pay more, others don\'t.
Tax issue is not a matter which is whether correct or not.
Everyone has their own opinion and grounds.
For me, paying more tax is better as many policies are being supported by taxes like education, health care.
And people want more wellfare policies.
In my perspective wellfare policies cannot be alone without tax.
It is a matter of giving and taking.
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There are many debates about taxes.>>Correct
Some insist people shold pay more, others don\'t.
Some insist people shold pay more, others don\'t.
>>Some insist that people should pay more, other\'s don\'t.
Tax issue is not a matter which is whether correct or not.
Tax issue is not a matter which is whether correct or not.
>>Tax issues is not a matter of which is correct or not.
Everyone has their own opinion and grounds.
Everyone has their own opinion and grounds.
>>Correct
For me, paying more tax is better as many policies are being supported by taxes like education, health care.
For me, paying more tax is better as many policies are being supported by taxes like education, health care.
>>For me, paying more tax is better as many policies are being supported by taxes like education, and health care.
And people want more wellfare policies.
And people want more wellfare policies.
>>And people want more welfare policies.
In my perspective wellfare policies cannot be alone without tax.
In my perspective wellfare policies cannot be alone without tax.
>>In my perspective, welfare policies cannot stand alone without tax.
It is a matter of giving and taking.
It is a matter of giving and taking.
>>Correct
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