3rd composition..
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i love to talk to the foreigner. but. i dont have the chance it. i think that the main problem is mine. i just want to do but dont try to do anything for it. so, this time i did register the phone english class. ^^ so. when i meet the teacher through the celluar phone, i'm so happy. but. my english skill makes me sad. i'm not good at english. that's the reason. but. i'm trying to improve my english skill. someday, i believe a good speaker.
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Hello [이름]^^
Thank you so much for sending this composition. Your writing ability is better now.
Keep it up^^ Have a nice afternoon!
i love to talk to the foreigner. but. i dont have the chance it.
>>I love talking to foreigners but, I don't have a chance to do it.
i think that the main problem is mine.
>>I think that the main problem is me.
i just want to do but dont try to do anything for it.
>>I want doing it but I don't do anything to try it.
so, this time i did register the phone english class.
>>This time I registered in a phone English class.
^^ so. when i meet the teacher through the celluar phone, i'm so happy.but. my english skill makes me sad.
>>When I met the teacher through the cellular phone, I was so happy but my English skills still make me sad.
i'm not good at english.
>>I'm not good at English.
that's the reason. but. i'm trying to improve my english skill.
>>That is the reason, but I'm trying to improve my English skills.
someday, i believe a good speaker.
>>Someday, I believe I wil be a good speaker.
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