3rd homework
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HOMEWORK:
Third homework
YOUR ANSWER:
I think a song that has something
similar to my life is \'Threshold of the Twilight\'.
This is a song by \'Wax\', a Korean singer.
This song is not exciting song and not sad, but it tell us about our
lives and parent\'s lives.
This song is not a hit song, but when I sang it in front of my parents,
they told me that after many years, you will feel that this song is
expressing our lives.
I was in the early 20s at that time.
But in a few years, I empathized with this song.
(p.s It\'s on the translator) This song contains lyrics such as \"I
was in love for the first time and then crying after a few days of
painful separation, but I became a tall woman and experienced a tough
world\", and lyrics such as \"My parents are old before I knew
it\", and \"I\'ve changed a lot since I was them in the
mirror.\"
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CORRECTIONS:
I think a song that has something
similar to my life is \'Threshold of the Twilight\'. This is a song by
\'Wax\', a Korean singer.
This song is not an exciting and a
sad one, but it tells us about our lives and parents’ lives.
This song is not a hit song, but when I sang it in front of my parents,
they told me that after many years, I will feel that this song is expressing our lives. I was
in my early 20’s at that time. But after just a few years, I empathized with this song.
( P.S. It\'s on the
translator) This song contains lyrics such as \"I was in love for the
first time and then crying after a few days of painful separation. But I became a stronger woman who have experienced a
tough world,\" and lyrics such
as \"My parents are old before I knew it, \" and \"I\'ve changed a lot since
I was them in the mirror.\"
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** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
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