3rd July

2011-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

I had a lesson today after a long interval because of business trip. I'm waiting today. When I went on business trip, I couldn’t speak in english well. I don’t know the why. I'm a little bit confused between English and Chinese. I cant speak well all of two. But I'm studying two languages. Sometimes it makes me very stressful. First of all, I have to memorize the words and phrases as possible as I can. Eventhough I know these, I don’t do that. What I need is not thinking but doing it. I really want to know whether I can do it or not.

강사 첨삭

Hi! You did a pretty good job in writing this. I believe that with frequent practice, you can be a  lot better at speaking both languages. You can do it! Have a great evening! - T. Faye - I had a lesson today after a long interval because of business trip. >> I had a lesson today after a long interval because of my business trip.I'm waiting today. >>I waited today. When I went on business trip, I couldn’t speak in english well. >> When I went on my business trip, I couldn’t speak in English well.I don’t know the why. >> I don't know why. I'm a little bit confused between English and Chinese. >>CorrectI cant speak well all of two. >>I can't speak both languages well. But I'm studying two languages. >>CorrectSometimes it makes me very stressful. >> Sometimes it makes me very stressed.First of all, I have to memorize the words and phrases as possible as I can. >>CorrectEventhough I know these, I don’t do that. >> Eventhough I know these, I don't use them.What I need is not thinking but doing it. >>What I need is not the idea but the application.I really want to know whether I can do it or not. >>Correct

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