3rd July
학생이 쓴 원문
I had a lesson today after a long interval because of business trip.
I'm waiting today. When I went on business trip, I couldn’t speak in english well.
I don’t know the why. I'm a little bit confused between English and Chinese.
I cant speak well all of two. But I'm studying two languages.
Sometimes it makes me very stressful.
First of all, I have to memorize the words and phrases as possible as I can.
Eventhough I know these, I don’t do that.
What I need is not thinking but doing it.
I really want to know whether I can do it or not.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
You did a pretty good job in writing this. I believe that with frequent practice, you can be a
lot better at speaking both languages. You can do it! Have a great evening!
- T. Faye -
I had a lesson today after a long interval because of business trip.
>> I had a lesson today after a long interval because of my business trip.I'm waiting today.
>>I waited today.
When I went on business trip, I couldn’t speak in english well.
>> When I went on my business trip, I couldn’t speak in English well.I don’t know the why.
>> I don't know why.
I'm a little bit confused between English and Chinese.
>>CorrectI cant speak well all of two.
>>I can't speak both languages well.
But I'm studying two languages.
>>CorrectSometimes it makes me very stressful.
>> Sometimes it makes me very stressed.First of all, I have to memorize the words and phrases as possible as I can.
>>CorrectEventhough I know these, I don’t do that.
>> Eventhough I know these, I don't use them.What I need is not thinking but doing it.
>>What I need is not the idea but the application.I really want to know whether I can do it or not.
>>Correct
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