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2015-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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If I would to visit one country, I want to visit New Zealand. I don't know about New Zealand but when I watched a movie entitled "The Lord Of The Rings", I really want to visit New Zealand. Because I thought that there were a lot of beautiful mountains and much fresh air in the movie. After I retire with my husband, I want to visit there. Also we promise that we will go all over the world. So when we are youthful, I have to save some money with my husband. However, it is very difficult.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   I\'m glad to check your homework again. Let\'s focus on SECOND CONDITIONAL.   a. Nature: unreal (impossible) or improbable situations. b. Time: present; the TENSE is past, but we are talking about the present, now.e.g. If I knew her name, I would tell you.If I were you, I would tell my father. Teacher Venus^^   If I would to visit one country, I want to visit New Zealand. >>>If I was given a chance to visit one country, I would visit New Zealand. I don\'t know about New Zealand but when I watched a movie entitled \"The Lord Of The Rings\", I really want to visit New Zealand. >>>CORRECT Because I thought that there were a lot of beautiful mountains and much fresh air in the movie. >>>CORRECT After I retire with my husband, I want to visit there. >>>CORRECT Also we promise that we will go all over the world. >>>Also we made a promise that we will go all over the world. So when we are youthful, I have to save some money with my husband. >>>So now that we are still youthful, I have to save some money with my husband. However, it is very difficult. >>>CORRECT

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