4.1 Homework
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Hi there! Good morning! Today is April Fools Day. Have a nice day!
Homework
What are the advantages and disadvantages of smartphone?
Smartphone has a lot of useful fucntions such as phone,camera,navigation and calculator.
This is a single device which is incoporated many electonic devices. So we can use many of the needs in one smartphone. It is the greatest advantage of smartphone. But unforturnately, cell phones are becoming quite addictive easily. Especially [이름] people are exposed to the addiction .This is the disadvantage of smartphone.
Thank you!
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Hi there! Good morning! Today is April Fools Day. Have a nice day!>> Correct.HomeworkWhat are the advantages and disadvantages of smartphone?Smartphone has a lot of useful fucntions such as phone,camera,navigation and calculator.>> A smartphone has a lot of useful fucntions such as phone, camera, navigation and calculator.
This is a single device which is incoporated many electonic devices.
>> This is a single device which has several functions.
So we can use many of the needs in one smartphone.
>> So we can use it in doing many things.
It is the greatest advantage of smartphone.
>> Correct.
But unforturnately, cell phones are becoming quite addictive easily.
>> But unforturnately, cell phones are becoming quite addictive.
>> Unfortunately, people can becoem addicted to it easily.
Especially [이름] people are exposed to the addiction .
>> Expecially [이름] people who are prone to addcition.
This is the disadvantage of smartphone.>>This is the disadvantage of a smartphone.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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