4/1 homework

2019-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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what kind of tricks do people play on April Fool\'s day in your country? I haven\'t celebrated April fool\'s day for many years. I think that teenagers like to play on it. They try to give trics to their teachers like changing classrooms, trying not to have classes and so on. However, students\' tricks are getting serious so schools don\'t allow them to have tricks anymore.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!(\",)

Thank you for making time to make your homework. You did a good job. Keep it up!(\",)

~Lynn

I haven\'t celebrated April fool\'s day for many years. 

>> correct!
 I think that teenagers like to play on it.

>> correct!

 They try to give trics to their teachers like changing classrooms, trying not to have classes and so on.

>> They try to do tricks to their teachers like changing classrooms, trying not to have classes and so on.

However, students\' tricks are getting serious so schools don\'t allow them to have tricks anymore.

>> correct!

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