4/1 homework

2020-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

학생이 쓴 원문

If I have a chance to speak in my field, I would focus on the history of my study field and future where we should go. Research or study also flow with the trend. So, it\'s very important to read the flow and prepare it in advance. Only then, I become a pioneer and get research money from the government or company. There are a lot of researchers in the world, and they make a trend. However, the trend is momentarily changing according to world situations related to the economy or environment. I don\'t want to say some researches are very important and some are not. But, we have to admit there are more important research results. Therefore, I think the most important thing is saying exactly for the impact of the own research in the world. If it is possible, many people understand how valuable the research even it is a very small thing. I believe that although carrying out experiments is important, explaining and describing them is more important. For that, researchers need constant study.

강사 첨삭

Thanks [이름] for the prompt response to the homework you were given. It\'s insightful as always, and most sentences are perfect, so way to go!
-Rachel 
If I have a chance to speak in my field, I would focus on the history of my study field and future where we should go.
>> If I have a chance to speak about my field, I would focus on it\'s history and our future direction. 
Research or study also flow with the trend. 
So, it\'s very important to read the flow and prepare it in advance.
>> correct
Only then can I become a pioneer and get research money from the government or company.
>> correct  (add can before I - Only then can I)
There are a lot of researchers in the world, and they make a trend.
>> correct 
However, the trend is momentarily changing according to world situations related to the economy or environment.
>> correct 
I don\'t want to say some researches are very important and some are not.
>> correct 
But, we have to admit there are more important research results.
>> correct 
Therefore, I think the most important thing is saying exactly for the impact of the own research in the world.
>> Therefore, I think the most important thing is saying exactly the impact of the personal or own research in the world. (remove for before impact)
If it is possible, many people understand how valuable the research even it is a very small thing.
>> If it is possible, let many people understand how valuable the research is even if it is a very small thing.
I believe that although carrying out experiments is important, explaining and describing them is more important. 
For that, researchers need constant study.
For that, researchers need constant study.
>> correct 

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