4.10 homework

2023-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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If I very close to my friend, I will give my inform, take care their events. But if I just know people, I don’t care whatever they do. I try to take care a lot around me. If they broken up someone, I listen their carefully and buy some drink. That’s way I take care of my friends.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Ye [이름]!
Keep going and you\'ll be great!
-Hanna ^^
If I very close to my friend, I will give my inform, take care their events.
>>If I am very close to my friend, I will share some important information and remember their life events too.
But if I just know people, I don’t care whatever they do.
>>But if it is someone I just know, I don\'t care about them.
I try to take care a lot around me.
>>I try to take care of the people close to me a lot.
If they broken up someone, I listen their carefully and buy some drink.
>>If they broke up with someone, I listen to them carefully and buy some drinks.
That’s way I take care of my friends.
>>That\'s how I take care of my friends.

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