4/10 homework

2015-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

April 10th is “National Sibling Day.” If you have a sibling, explain what activities you enjoy doing with them. If you don’t have a sibling, would you like one? Why or why not? I have a sister. We do not live together now. I sometimes go to the her house in Pusan, Korea. We usually have a dinner or watch movies. It was a great time. I love her. because she always seems to be understand my feel and thought. so I try to understand her opinion and thought, me too. Thank you for your favor.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

 

Wow, finally you submitted your homework. Thank you for your diligence.

 

Reminders:

1. I sometimes go to the her house in Pusan, Korea.

- You don\'t need to put \'the\' here.

 

2. I love her because she always seems to understand my feeling and thought.

- \'because she always seems to understand my feeling and thought\' cannot stand alone so you need to combine it to an independent clause.

 

Teacher Venus^^

 

I have a sister.

>>>CORRECT

 

We do not live together now.

>>>CORRECT

 

I sometimes go to the her house in Pusan, Korea.

>>>I sometimes go to her house in Pusan, Korea.

 

We usually have a dinner or watch movies.

>>>CORRECT

 

 It was a great time.

>>>CORRECT

 

I love her. because she always seems to be understand my feel and thought.

>>>I love her because she always seems to understand my feeling and thought.

 

so I try to understand her opinion and thought, me too.
>>>So I try to understand her opinion and thought.


Thank you for your favor.

>>>CORRECT

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