4/10 homework
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Reminders:
1. I sometimes go to the her house in Pusan, Korea.
- You don\'t need to put \'the\' here.
2. I love her because she always seems to understand my feeling and thought.
- \'because she always seems to understand my feeling and thought\' cannot stand alone so you need to combine it to an independent clause.
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I have a sister.
>>>CORRECT
We do not live together now.
>>>CORRECT
I sometimes go to the her house in Pusan, Korea.
>>>I sometimes go to her house in Pusan, Korea.
We usually have a dinner or watch movies.
>>>CORRECT
It was a great time.
>>>CORRECT
I love her. because she always seems to be understand my feel and thought.
>>>I love her because she always seems to understand my feeling and thought.
so I try to understand her opinion and thought, me too.
>>>So I try to understand her opinion and thought.
Thank you for your favor.
>>>CORRECT
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