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[The factor which I think contribute to a good movie]


I think the movie is best means to contribute to people. 

>>> I think movies\' main objective is to contribute good things and entertain people.
 We experience new like or new sight during watching a movie.

>>> We learn new things and enjoy some sight while watching movies.
 There are so many kind of movie in whole world, action, romance, SF, or family movies.

>>> There are so many kinds of movies in the world like action, romance, SF and family movies.
I like all genres of movie. 

>>> I like all movie genres.
 However, sometimes common people can not understand the director\'s intention.

>>> Correct!
 I thought the good movie is one to give a message, even if it is small thing.

>>> I think that a good movie is one which has a good message no matter how small it is.
 I extremely love Harry potter. 

>>> Correct!
 I like to stimulate my imagination. 

>>> Correct!
 And I love the story if we never give up and just go ahead, we can get the victory.

>>> And I love movies which are focused on determination resulting to success.