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2018-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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In 4 to 5 sentences explain the effects of global warming. -> Global warming bring about the abnormal weather condition and affect the crop changes. In addition, animals and plants are directly suffering from habitat changes. For instance, tropical plants can be found in area that were not tropical. The North Pole and South Pole are much more serious, with the area of the North Pole and South Pole shrinking, and polar bears increasingly losing their food and habitat. Accordingly, there are animals and plants in danger of extinction, and some creatures are already extinct.

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Teacher Brian

In 4 to 5 sentences explain the effects of global warming.
>>In 4 to 5 sentences explain the effects of global warming.
Global warming bring about the abnormal weather condition and affect the crop changes.
>> Global warming causes abnormal weather conditions and it affects the crops.

In addition, animals and plants are directly suffering from habitat changes.
>> In addition the animals and plants are suffering from their habitat.

For instance, tropical plants can be found in area that were not tropical.
>> for instance tropical plants grow in places where they don\'t grow before

The North Pole and South Pole are much more serious, with the area of the North Pole and South Pole shrinking, and polar bears increasingly losing their food and habitat.
>> the North Pole and South Pole conditions are getting worse the ice are melting and animals like polar bears are starving and losing their natural habitat

Accordingly, there are animals and plants in danger of extinction, and some creatures are already extinct.

>> Some animals and plants are in danger of extinction and some are already extinct because of the global warming.

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