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[If you could take a work-cation or sabbatical, where would you go and what would you do?]
If I have a sabbatical year in the future, I want to go abroad.
Moreover, it would be a university or research center.
I hope to go there with my family.
I think the research requires curiosity and public spirit to researchers.
If we want to find a new theory or invention, we should invest the time to them.
In Korea, usually, researchers are very busy and work too late.
The time spending with family or children is relatively short.
If I will have a sabbatical and go to abroad with my family, I would have a lot of time with family.
I want to go to university abroad for a short time, and then get off work after lunch.
I think this is a very nice way to feel and learn different country\' research environment, at the same time, have time with family.
I don\'t know it will be possible or not, but just imagination make me happy.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Wonderful Wednesday to you and so wonderful of you to spend time with your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. Yes! Sometimes it\'s nice to imagine and think about things we would like to happen to us in the future. It really makes us feel better. Who knows, right? ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
If I have a sabbatical year in the future, I want to go abroad.
>>Correct
Moreover, it would be a university or research center.
Moreover, it would be a university or research center.
>>Correct
I hope to go there with my family.
I hope to go there with my family.
>>Correct
I think the research requires curiosity and public spirit to researchers.
I think the research requires curiosity and public spirit to researchers.
>>I think doing a research requires curiosity and a lot of will power.
If we want to find a new theory or invention, we should invest the time to them.
If we want to find a new theory or invention, we should invest the time to them.
>>If we want to find a new theory or invention, we should invest our time on it.
In Korea, usually, researchers are very busy and work too late.
In Korea, usually, researchers are very busy and work too late.
>>In Korea, researchers are oftentimes very busy and work until late.
The time spending with family or children is relatively short.
The time spending with family or children is relatively short.
>>The time spent with family or children is relatively short.
If I will have a sabbatical and go to abroad with my family, I would have a lot of time with family.
If I will have a sabbatical and go to abroad with my family, I would have a lot of time with family.
>>If I will have a sabbatical and go abroad with my family, I can have the chance to spend more time with them.
I want to go to university abroad for a short time, and then get off work after lunch.
I want to go to university abroad for a short time, and then get off work after lunch.
>>I just can spend a few hours in the university and take the rest of the day off.
I think this is a very nice way to feel and learn different country\' research environment, at the same time, have time with family.
I think this is a very nice way to feel and learn different country\' research environment, at the same time, have time with family.
>>Correct
I don\'t know it will be possible or not, but just imagination make me happy.
I don\'t know it will be possible or not, but just imagination make me happy.
>>I don\'t know if it will be possible in the future or not, but just thinking/imagining about it makes me happy.
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