4-10th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^

It\'s good to read your essay again.

I\'m really glad that you\'re feeling so much better now.

I think being productive is necessary if you want to succeed.

In addition to that, working with other people is also important.

They say that the most successful people in the world are great because they are good leaders and followers.

Asking for help from others doesn\'t make you a lesser person.

It is an indication of humility and that you are willing to learn.

That is my point-of-view in this matter.

I hope you\'re having a great day.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

Being productive or successful is important to do something in the company.

>> Being productive or successful is important in the company.
Of course, the personal area is also important to be productive.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Of course, the personal aspect is also important in being productive.
When we start to do something, someone already know how to do and what to do something.

>> [Do you mean]: When we start to do something, someone already knows how to do it and how to accomplish it. 

So, they don\'t ask a help from others.

>> So, they don\'t ask help from others.
But nobody does like that.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> But nobody does that.
If you have a lot of experience about a task that you have to do, you wouldn\'t take an error.

>> If you have a lot of experience about a task that you have to do, you wouldn\'t have an error.
In general, we don\'t have the specific experience when we begin to do.

>> In general, we don\'t have the specific experience when we begin to do something.
In order to reduce the errors during executing the tasks, we need a lot of help from other, I think.

>> In order to reduce the errors during executing the tasks, I think we need a lot of help from others. 

To get the help might seem to be a poor man but it is not true.

>> [Do you mean]: Asking for help seems to show weakness but it is not true.
When we do something, we have to finish in complete and fast.

>> When we do something, we have to finish it completely and fast.
To do like that, we need the appropriate helps from others who well know it.

>> To do that, we need appropriate help from others who know what to do.
I think it is the cooperation.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I think that is because of cooperation.
These days, we couldn\'t do the thing alone.

>> These days, we couldn\'t do a thing alone.
We have to add each knowledge in order to solve the completed problems.

>> We each have to add knowledge in order to solve the completed problems.
Even if you are a professional, the cooperation would be a requirement.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Even though you are a professional, cooperation would still be a requirement.