4.11 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What type of exercise would you like to do in the future? Why?
I want to run for health.
And I want to do weights to build muscle.
강사 첨삭
With discipline and hard work, you can achieve your goal, Toress.-Faith-
What type of exercise would you like to do in the future? Why?>> CORRECT
I want to run for health.
>> I want to run for my health.
And I want to do weights to build muscle.
And I want to do weights to build muscle.
>> Also, I want to lift weights to build muscles.
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