4.11 Homework

2014-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi ma'am! Good morning? It looks like it will rain. I am afraid that the weather tomorrow will not good. as you know, I have an appointment to play golf tomorrow. Homework What motivates you when you are down? When I am down,I often listen to music,especially Classic. Music brings me comfort and relaxation. I sometimes get enough sleep and then I feel better in the mood. I think I am an optimist. So I don't need any worry. Thank you! Have a great weekend!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework early today. I hope that the weather would be nice tomorrow so you can play golf. Take care and enjoy your weekend. ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good morning? >> Correct.  It looks like it will rain. >> Correct.  I am afraid that the weather tomorrow will not good. >> I am afraid that the weather tomorrow will not be good. as you know, I have an appointment to play golf tomorrow. >> Correct.  >> As you know, I am going to play golf tomorrow.HomeworkWhat motivates you when you are down?When I am down,I often listen to music,especially Classic. >> When I am down, I often listen to music, especially Classical music. Music brings me comfort and relaxation. >> Music gives me comfort and relaxation. I sometimes get enough sleep and then I feel better in the mood. >> Aside from music, I sometimes get enough sleep and I feel better after.I think I am an optimist. >> I think I am optimistic. So I don\'t need any worry. >> So I don\'t have any worries.Thank you! Have a great weekend! >> Correct. 

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