4.11 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning? It looks like it will rain. I am afraid that the weather tomorrow will not good. as you know, I have an appointment to play golf tomorrow.
Homework
What motivates you when you are down?
When I am down,I often listen to music,especially Classic. Music brings me comfort and relaxation. I sometimes get enough sleep and then I feel better in the mood.
I think I am an optimist. So I don't need any worry.
Thank you! Have a great weekend!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework early today. I hope that the weather would be nice tomorrow so you can play golf. Take care and enjoy your weekend.
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good morning?
>> Correct.
It looks like it will rain.
>> Correct.
I am afraid that the weather tomorrow will not good.
>> I am afraid that the weather tomorrow will not be good.
as you know, I have an appointment to play golf tomorrow.
>> Correct.
>> As you know, I am going to play golf tomorrow.HomeworkWhat motivates you when you are down?When I am down,I often listen to music,especially Classic.
>> When I am down, I often listen to music, especially Classical music.
Music brings me comfort and relaxation.
>> Music gives me comfort and relaxation.
I sometimes get enough sleep and then I feel better in the mood.
>> Aside from music, I sometimes get enough sleep and I feel better after.I think I am an optimist.
>> I think I am optimistic.
So I don\'t need any worry.
>> So I don\'t have any worries.Thank you! Have a great weekend!
>> Correct.
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