4.11 homework!

2018-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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Describe the most interesting person you met on one of your travels? I have traveled alone once. Travel destination is a domestic\'s sea. That\'s the reason is stressed at work. That time is hot summer. The sea was green and cool. So i was feel healing. By the way, i was not only one to have traveled alone. I found out that so many people travel alone. One of them was seen trying to take a picture by herself. As it happened, i was also going to take a picture. I offered to take pictures of each other without hesitation. She accepted my offer and although we had never seen each other before, we took many pictures posing in front of beach in various poses.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
thank you for doing you assignment
it\'s good to be travel bug,
we share the same passion. Enjoy ^^

Teacher Brian,



Describe the most interesting person you met on one of your travels?
Describe the most interesting person you met on one of your travels?
I have traveled alone once.
>>CORRECT 

Travel destination is a domestic\'s sea.
>> I traveled domestic only 

That\'s the reason is stressed at work.
>> The reason is because I am stressed at work 

That time is hot summer.
>> It was a hot summer 

The sea was green and cool.
>>CORRECT 

So i was feel healing.
>> I felt relaxed 

By the way, i was not only one to have traveled alone.
>> I am not the only person who is travelling alone 

I found out that so many people travel alone.
>> I found that a lot of people also travel alone 

One of them was seen trying to take a picture by herself.
>> I\'ve seen one taking a picture by herself

As it happened, i was also going to take a picture.
>> I also took some pictures of mine 

I offered to take pictures of each other without hesitation.
>>I asked if we can take pictures of each other without any hesitation 

She accepted my offer and although we had never seen each other before, we took many pictures posing in front of beach in various poses.

>>She accepted my offer even if I am a stranger, we took a lot of pictures in front of the beach in different poses.

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