4. 11 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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- Blair
To get a job or something, people must do someting like tests. If I failed at a test, I must prepare more for next test and it will makes me hard. It will also take more time from me. So the risk in my life can be failing a test. Another risk maybe weddig which I can do someday. Different 2 people being a family looks so difficult. Marrying will change my life absolutely to different direction with past. I can be happy or unhappy. So marrying can be another risk, I think.
To be able to get a job, people must take exams, If I failed in a test, I must prepare and do better for the next exam, and it will give me difficulty and take more of my time too. So the risk of failing in an important test can be a risk for me. Another is getting married someday. Two different people being together and building a family looks challenging for me, it will absolutely change my entire life, it could be a successful one or not. So marriage can be another risk I think.
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