4.11 homework

2019-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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1. particular like 2. approximately 3. contribute 4. delightful 5. enrich 1. Is there anything in particular you\'d like for dinner? 2. I go to market in my area approximately one to twice a week. 3. My parents have contributed to raise us. Now, It is my turn to take care of them because i all fully grew up. 4. The cherry blossom is delightful color. Whenever i see the cherry blossom in full bloom, my eyes are refreshed. 5. Soy suace is the best ingredient enriching the taste of this meal.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!

Jean

1. particular like
2. approximately
3. contribute
4. delightful
5. enrich

1. Is there anything in particular you\'d like for dinner?

>> correct

2. I go to market in my area approximately one to twice a week.

>> I go to a market in my area about once or twice a week.

3. My parents have contributed to raise us. Now, It is my turn to take care of them because i all fully grew up.

>> My parents have raised us and contributed largely to our upbringing. However, it is my turn to care for them because I\'m all grown up now.

4. The cherry blossom is delightful color. Whenever i see the cherry blossom in full bloom, my eyes are refreshed.

>> The cherry blossom has a delightful color. Whenever I see the cherry blossom in full bloom, my eyes feel refreshed.

5. Soy suace is the best ingredient enriching the taste of this meal.

>> Soy sauce is the best ingredient to enrich the taste of this meal.

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