4-11th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^

Thanks for writing in our composition board.

I think the presence of too much yellow dust and micro dust in Korea is becoming a very big environmental problem.

I\'m glad you brought this up.

I think, Korea cannot do anything about China\'s abuse of the environment but there is something that the Korean government and its people can absolutely do.

Instead of turning forests into cities, why not protect them instead and make sure that they do not get ruined?

Instead of building skyscrapers, why not plant trees?

There are more than fifty million people in South Korea today.

I\'m sure that if each person would take the time to plant at least one tree a year and make sure that it lives and grows, you will have more or less fifty million trees to help you filter the dust.

You see, this is a very simple task but most of us won\'t give the time to do it.

We always have reasons and excuses.

These are just a few things that we could actually do to reduce air pollution.

There are tons of other strategies out there but I\'m afraid my essay would be too long already.

All I\'m saying is, we are not helpless. There is definitely something that we could do.

Anyhow, this is my point-of-view in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you tomorrow. :)

~Teacher C[이름] 

Until now, I wrote down the sentences depending on the main issue of the composition board every class.

>> [Do you mean]: Up to this moment, I\'ve always written an essay depending on the main issue indicated in the composition board every class.
But I want to change this rule for a short term.

>> CORRECT!

>> But I want to change this rule temporarily.

That\'s why it\'s very difficult to consider it and is like a black and white thought.

>> That\'s why it\'s very difficult to consider it and it is like a black and white thought.
Today, my composition is related with the weather.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Today, my composition talks about the weather. 

Many years ago, I always felt fresh air everyday in the morning.

>> Many years ago, I always experienced breathing in fresh air everyday in the morning.
Nowadays, the fresh air is very important to live in health.

>> Nowadays, the fresh air is very important to live a healthy life.

OR >> Nowadays, fresh air is very important to be healthy.

Our new governments seen to reduce the fine dust in the air, using several methods.

>> Our new governments has seen to it that the fine dust in the air would be reduced, using several methods.
But our country is next by China which makes a lot of polluted materials.

>> But our country is next to China which makes/creates a lot of pollution.
The worst thing that we could never change is the location.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The worst part of it is that, we could never change the location.
Korea is placed in the east of China, and it is a westerly wind area.

>> Korea is located in the east side of China, and the wind blows in the westerly/western area.
Therefore, even if we try to reduce the fine dust in domestic, since a lot of fine dust of China flew into Korea, our efforts reducing the fine dust might be fail.

>> Therefore, even if we try to reduce the fine dust in Korea, a large portion of fine dust still come to our country because of China. Our efforts in reducing the fine dust might fail.
I want to live in clean environment and to breathe fresh air.

>> I want to live in a clean environment and to breathe fresh air.
So, I want to balance with the development and environment.

>> So, I want to have a balance between development and environment.