4/12 homework.
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I participated in the \'water [이름] festival\' at last summer.
I couldn\'t take a shower during 3 hours after water playing... Because there are too many people who want to shower.
And I could take a shower at my home.
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Hey [이름] [이름]!
Did you know that morning showers are actually considered to be more advantageous. A shower taken early doors is a greater help in combating acne, and also in terms of balancing the natural oils on the skin.
- Kristine ^^
I participated in the \'water [이름] festival\' at last summer.
>> I took part in the Water [이름] Festival last summer.
I couldn\'t take a shower during 3 hours after water playing...
I couldn\'t take a shower during 3 hours after water playing...
>> I couldn\'t take a shower after playing in the water for three hours.
Because there are too many people who want to shower.
>> Because many people wanted to take a shower.
And I could take a shower at my home.
And I could take a shower at my home.
>> I could also take a shower at home.
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