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I think that it is best to rest. But if I have very much stress for something, I will drink with my close friends. But if it is normal, I will be alone and watching youtube or netflex.
Or doing exercise a lot than before.
It is my way to reduce stress.
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I think that it is best to rest.
>>Correct
But if I have very much stress for something, I will drink with my close friends.
>>But if I am so stressed about something, I will drink alcohol with my close friends.
But if it is normal, I will be alone and watching youtube or netflex.
>>But if it is something I can handle, I would want to be alone and watch Youtube or Netflix.
Or doing exercise a lot than before.
>>Or exercise more than usual.
It is my way to reduce stress.
>>Correct.
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