4.12 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Is exercise enough to be healthy or a balance diet is also needed? Please explain your answer.
I think you need to do a balanced workout to be healthy.
Diet is only necessary when dieting, and many Koreans exercise to eat.
As long as you exercise well, your diet doesn\'t seem to matter too much.
강사 첨삭
That sounds good, Toress! I hope you can already start exercising for your health.-Faith-
Is exercise enough to be healthy or a balance diet is also needed? Please explain your answer.>> CORRECT
I think you need to do a balanced workout to be healthy.
>> CORRECT
Diet is only necessary when dieting, and many Koreans exercise to eat.
>> Diet is only necessary when dieting, and many Koreans exercise to eat well.
As long as you exercise well, your diet doesn\'t seem to matter too much.
>> CORRECT
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