4/12 homework

Thanks for sharing something about this place [이름]!

It sounds really amazing.

I hope I could visit there someday.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

[Essay on a one day trip to my favorite place]

I like to drive Jeju island by a car. 

>>> I like to drive to Jeju Island by car.
 Jeju island is not so big, and the seaside road is really beautiful. 

>>> Correct!
 The small Jeju island have both of mountain and sea views. 

>>> The small island has both mountain and sea views.
 When I walk around seashore and forest in a day, I become relax and release the stress. 

>>> When I walk around the seashore and the forest for a day, I become relaxed and relieved from stress.
 Among many good place in Jeju, my favorite one is Saryuni forest road. 

>>> Among many good places in Jeju, my favorite one is Saryuni forest road.
 There are so many trees which have specific fragrance from berry.

>>> There are so many trees which smell like berries.
 The fragrance is similar with mint, but more sweet. 

>>> The fragrance is similar with that of mint but it\'s sweeter.
 It makes me relaxed during a walk.

>>> It makes me feel relaxed during a walk.
 When someone asking me about good place in Jeju, always I recommend the road.

>>> When someone asks me about a good place in Jeju, I always recommend the road.