4-12th Homework

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for making time to write an essay in our composition board today. 

I honestly think that your main concern right now is not your major but the expertise or specialization that you should have at work. 

I understand that you feel a bit frustrated about it and it\'s normal to feel that way.  

What\'s not normal is easily giving up.

I hope you haven\'t thought about quitting.

The best advice that I could give you is that, when things get tough don\'t stop.

Continue moving forward.

It\'s not easy but it will be worth it.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing okay today.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

I will talk about my major.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I want to talk about my major.
I has worked for 17 years in my field but I could not easily say what my major is.

>> I have worked for 17 years in my field but I could not easily explain my major. 

Normally, I was used to say that I was a hardware engineer.

>> Normally, I would usually say that I am a hardware engineer.

OR >> I used to say that I am a hardware engineer.
But if someone ask to me what your major is, I would not find a specific answer.

>> But if someone asks me what my major is, I could not give a specific answer.
Nowadays, it is my consideration during I find a new job and I apply to other companies.

>> Nowadays, I consider this when I find a new job and (I) apply to other companies.
I didn\'t think about it until I try to find another companies.

>> I didn\'t think about it until I tried to find another company.

OR >> I didn\'t think about it until I tried to look for other companies.
Normally, when I applied to some company, they ask to me, \"what can you do?\", or \"can you deal with some application programs?, like that.

>> Normally, when I apply to some companies, they ask to me, \"what can you do?\" or \"can you deal with some application programs?\".

So, I had thought that I had a good skill to do something.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> So, I thought I was skillful enough.
But it was my misunderstand for my situation.

>> But I misunderstood my situation.
The companies where I want to work seem to want to me a more specific thing which I already have.

>> [Do you mean]: The companies where I want to work to seem to want me to have a specialization. 

Therefore, I have to study something to get more things which they want to me.

>> Therefore, I have to study something to get the expertise that they want me to have. 

Even if I seriously want to study something, there is a limit, it\'s my brain.

>> Even if I seriously want to study something, there is still a limitation for my brain. 

In so many time, I has used my brain so that it is not smarter than before.

>> [Do you mean]: I have used my brain for a long time and it is not as smart as before.
It\'s a big problem.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s a great problem for me.