4.13 homework

2023-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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If they have their own business I’m not tell anything. Because they need to money. Also it is good for debt if they use it. But if they use just play, I’m not like that. Like a gamble, drink, smoke, and buy sex. If they use debt, it is good. But if they are not good to use debt, it is bad for themselves.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Ye [이름]!

Keep expressing your thoughts in English^^

-Hanna ^^

If they have their own business I’m not tell anything.

>>If they have their own business, then I can\'t say anything against it.

Because they need to money. 

>>Because they need the money.

Also it is good for debt if they use it.

>>It is also okay to have a debt if they use it for that.
But if they use just play, I’m not like that.

>>But if they will use it just for leisure, I think it is not okay.
Like a gamble, drink, smoke, and buy sex.

>>Like gambling, drinking, smoking and buying sex.
If they use debt, it is good. 

>>If the they used the money well, then it is okay.

But if they are not good to use debt, it is bad for themselves.

>>But if they use it in a bad way, then it is not good for them.

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