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2018-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Vitti

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If you could move anywhere, where would you like to live? I want to live Italy. I visted to Roma and Venezia in 6years ago. I could not forgot to Italy. First of all, Italy was very beautiful and the weather was so nice. Besides there were many had Landmark(ancient ruins) so it can to see. Best it was verious delicious food which Italy pizza, desiert and so on. And the people of street also was fashionable and it looks good. So if I could to move anywhere, I want to live in Italy.

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If you could move anywhere, where would you like to live?

I want to live Italy.
I visted to Roma and Venezia in 6years ago.
I could not forgot to Italy.
First of all, Italy was very beautiful and the weather was so nice.
Besides there were many had Landmark(ancient ruins) so it can to see.
Best it was verious delicious food which Italy pizza, desiert and so on.
And the people of street also was fashionable and it looks good.
So if I could to move anywhere, I want to live in Italy.




If I could move anywhere, I would like to live in Italy.


First of all, since I visited Rome and Venetia 6 years ago I can say that Italy was a very beautiful place and the weather was so nice. There were also many wonderful Landmarks of ancient ruins that you could see. They even offer various delicious foods like pizzas and desserts.  You can also see fashionable people on the street.



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