4.13 homework!

2018-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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When was the last time you went to the beach? Where did you go? I went to Jeong dong jin beach 1 years ago with my boy friend. It was difficult to arrange the schedule of my boy friend and me. And at that time, we took a train because sadly we didn\'t have a car and license. And then we had been experience inconvenience moving at a tourist site. To make things worse, i got upset stomach because of the food i ate the day before my trip. So i had to lie in bad on the trip without doing everything i had planned.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
Thank You for doing your assignment
I hope you can visit the Philippines
we have a lot of beautiful beaches here :)


Teacher Brian,


When was the last time you went to the beach? Where did you go?
When was the last time you went to the beach? Where did you go?
I went to Jeong dong jin beach 1 years ago with my boy friend.

>> I went to Jeong dong jin beach a year ago with my boyfriend
It was difficult to arrange the schedule of my boy friend and me.
>> It was quite difficult to arrange our schedule 

And at that time, we took a train because sadly we didn\'t have a car and license.
>> we took the train because we didn\'t have a car and license. 

And then we had been experience inconvenience moving at a tourist site.
>> we encountered some inconvenience visiting the tourist sites 

To make things worse, i got upset stomach because of the food i ate the day before my trip.
>> and I had a stomach flu because of the foo I ate before out trip  

So i had to lie in bad on the trip without doing everything i had planned.

>> So I needed to lie in bed during the trip without doing anything that I had planned

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